Summer movie challenge day 5

Day 5
(Careful for spoilers)
Delivery man

(I dont believe in this film so read as much as you'd like)

Final verdict: I give this movie a 5.5/10. A "if you'd like to" rent. This was not a bad movie. It was to serious to be a comedy but so simple it couldnt be a drama. With those opposing factors, its not all that memorable. So if you want to watch it, catch it on cable, cause its nothing special.

Where it successed The title is a pun. He delivers meat and offspring.
Chris Pratt was an excellent friend countering Vince. The introduction of Vinces plan to meet his kids was good and entertaining but after kid 5 loses its luster.

They managed to get 3 big name celebrities Vince Vaughn. Colbie Smulders and Chris Pratt

Where it fails Its not all thay memorable or relatable.  How many of us have been to a sperm donors offices? How many have donated enough for 500+ kids....not alot id bet. The overall story is bland. I could have made this a better film, but not by much. It failed to make the audience care. We should cry when he meets his kids. There was no quotable moments or scenes which make you like this movie. Even crap can be infamous. And some would say infamy is better than nothing.

My version
So first i would Role Reversal chris pratt. He should be the david wisneiak( the lead)  and Vince Vaughn should be the best friend married guy (like he was in old school). Imagine! Lovable goofy Chris Pratt as a father of alot of kids! Whoa! Also I would reduce 500+ to 10 or even 20. The numbers are to comedic to be taken seriously. Next lets make our star like quagmire (a sex addicit). This limits our cast to past girlfriends and kids instead off 500+ unknown faces in a room.

Now I still wouldnt want to see this movie just yet, lets choose a genre! This movie tries to be dramatic, comedic, and ground breaking. Im going to choose drama. Let is follow the struggle of a sez addicit learning thay he is the father of 20 children and by meeting each of them learns that the single sex filled life is not what he wants. And much like the original movie lets have one child be disabillied this give Pratt a range. He can be serious with the kids, happy with his friends and romantic with his exes (he'll choose one).

In conclusion, theme, plot, and casting alone, there is no way to make this a 10/10 movie.